I have been learning to out all my capital letters and full stops in my writing correctly.

When l am famous l will have a private Island with a three story mansion.

When l am famous l will go buy a rocket then l will go to the moon.

When l am famous l will have 9 quadrillion dollars in my cashflow card.

 When l am famous l will watch my favourite YouTuber. 

When l am famous l will be a YouTuber and l will play Minecraft and Roblox.

When l am famous l will let my family stay with me in my three story mansion.

When l am famous l will have a butler to bring me food.

When l am famous l will have a helicopter to drive to my private Island.

When l am famous l will have three bodyguards.

When l am famous l will give poor people 900 dollars. 

We were learning to retell a story.  After we had done our writing we put on our blog.  We put pictures in.  My favourite part was putting it on my blog.  I found it hard writing the story. Here is my story.

l was driving to grandad’s home in the car and we got out of the car l fell out of the car. Dad told Grandad that l have a water bottle and snacks.  My grandad he put me down on a cardboard box l was disappointed because my Grandad dad told me he would play with me. He said that he would finish the lawn first. l saw a photo of my dad in a wagon. l stacked stuff to grab a photo of my dad. l fell and grandad came and said that your dad didn’t tell you about the escaped zoo monkeys. Grandad and me took the wagon to play in.  We went into a boat there wash a waterfall.  We went into a plane, we shot aliens, there was a big alien and we shot it then dad came.  Dad said how did you get dirty and then we went home and. I had a bath then I went to bed.